Writing Prompt
If you wrote a letter to your younger self, especially at a vulnerable age (8? 13?) when you needed mentoring or guidance, what would that letter say?
Wednesday, March 30, 2011
Author Sell Thyself
You don't need me to tell you that the publishing world is in an upheaval. Salon.com book critic Laura Miller has written a must-read article Author Sell Thyself. It begins: Last week, the book world saw a particularly symmetrical bit of
revolving door ballet as Amanda Hocking -- who famously became a
millionaire by selling a series of paranormal romance novels as
self-published e-books -- signed a contract with an old-fashioned
publishing house, while the bestselling thriller author Barry Eisler
walked away from a similar deal, preferring to self-publish his next
book. Did I mention it was the same publisher (St. Martin's Press) in
both cases? Like I said: symmetrical. And here is the link to the NY Times piece about Amanda Hocking's book deal with St. Martins.
Why I Write
Lately I've been trying (or perhaps struggling is the precise word--why did I never study web building?) to build a web site for my Summer in Words conference. So I haven't written a lot this week and I'm finding myself a bit adrift without my writing routine. People sometimes ask me why I don't write fiction or why I don't write the story of my life or why I don't write children's books. I'm writing books for writers at this time in my career because it's a way to reach people. And I'm sort of a nerd who likes to figure out how stories and language works and how it all intersects with the human brain.And I write because I receive emails like this one:
I'm so happy I found your blog today.
I bought
Between the Lines about five years ago, and it has done more to advance
my novelcraft than any of the dozens of writing books I have acquired
over the years.
Looking forward to your posts and further enlightenment.
Cheers,
Michael J. Pollack
Keep writing, keep studying craft, have heart
Monday, March 28, 2011
From an Editor's Desk:
French historian and novelist Andre Malraux said, "What is man? A miserable little pile of secrets." Which leads me to ask: what secrets are your characters keeping hidden from prying eyes? What secrets will be revealed in your memoir? Your short story? Secrets incite curiosity and suspense; reveal so many hidden chambers in the human heart. Although we live in an age of compulsive exposure and tell-all gossip amid a 24-hour news cycle, many people shroud their secret shames and obsessions and fears and desires within. When you write fiction, know the mysteries within your characters. When you plot, figure out just how much you can expose and who these confessions will be revealed to.
Keep writing, keep dreaming, have heart
Quote of the day:
"In my work there is no drum, there is no song, but the mask is the result of a transformation that occurred in my studio." Willie Cole
"In my work there is no drum, there is no song, but the mask is the result of a transformation that occurred in my studio." Willie Cole
Where to Dump a Corpse and other Tips
The sun just peeked out. I mean it. After raining most of the weekend. Which is why I attended two plays--and am still sort of basking in the images and brilliance I saw on the stage this weekend (Futura and One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest). For those of you who are writing mysteries and thrillers and face that pesky task of disposing of corpses and such here's a helpful interview with best-selling thriller author Chelsea Cain at Northwest Book Lovers. Here's a tidbit from that interview:Your writers group is replete with big wigs in the literary world. What’s some of the best advice you’ve gotten from your cohorts? They are all so smart and full of zingers. Chuck Palahniuk is great with objects. He taught me to use objects more and better. Archie’s pillbox in the earlier books, for instance. It’s such great shorthand for what’s going on in his head. How Archie interacts with and thinks about that pillbox ends up being way more revealing than anything he says. And Chuck taught me to go back to The Object at least three times in a chapter. “Don’t lose your objects,” he always says. This is a Dangerous Writer-ism, something Chuck picked up from his old mentor Tom Spanbauer and his Dangerous Writing workshop. Suzy Vitello taught me to take time to reveal a character’s emotional landscape. Don’t wallow in it. But take half a paragraph and unpack (“unpack” – that’s another Dangerous Writer-ism) the goods. Let the reader inside. I’m not talking about exposition. No telling. Just going internal and showing what a character has at stake emotionally. Lidia Yuknavitch teaches me words. She can use words like no one I’ve ever met. Monica Drake taught me to take time with dialog. Her gift for dialog and her sense of timing are amazing. Mary Wysong taught me the power of the smallest gesture. Describing how a character hunches his shoulders or holds a coffee cup can speak volumes. Erin Leonard taught me to embrace absurdity. Cheryl Strayed is incredible at creating small profound moments, and she is such a hard worker and so productive. They all make me feel like an underachiever.
Sunday, March 27, 2011
E-book dust up
The future of e-books in the publishing world is fast evolving. If you're in the process of signing any kind of publishing contract, it's vital to nail down your electronic rights. Here's a case in point: The Catherine Cookson estate is about to offer her books as cut priced e-books, bypassing her publishers.
Saturday, March 26, 2011
It's the sort of wet morning where a person, well, at least this person, just doesn't want to creep out of bed. Wet and gray out there in Portlandia and I'm already speculating if I can get a nap in later. But the show must go on for now and I wanted to post this lovely quote by Jeanette Winterson--the source of so many observations that strike me as wise. Who seems to understand the enduring importance of storytelling. Keep writing, keep dreaming, have heart
"There it is; the light across the water. Your story. Mine. His. It has to be seen to be believed. And it has to be heard. In the endless babble of narrative, in spite of the daily noise, the story waits to be heard.
Some people say that the best stories have no words. It is true that words drop away, and that the important things are often left unsaid. The important things are learned in faces, in gestures, not in our locked tongues. The true things are too big or too small, or in any case always the wrong size to fit in the template called language." ~ Jeanette Winterson
"There it is; the light across the water. Your story. Mine. His. It has to be seen to be believed. And it has to be heard. In the endless babble of narrative, in spite of the daily noise, the story waits to be heard.
Some people say that the best stories have no words. It is true that words drop away, and that the important things are often left unsaid. The important things are learned in faces, in gestures, not in our locked tongues. The true things are too big or too small, or in any case always the wrong size to fit in the template called language." ~ Jeanette Winterson
Friday, March 25, 2011
It's Flannery O'Connor's birthday
Alice Elliott Dark writes:
Flannery
O' Connor thought you couldn't separate a story from its meaning—that
it was indescribable except in its own words. At first, I didn't get it.
That claim was more readily apparent in music and painting—but couldn't
stories be described, their themes extrapolated?
Yet
I sensed there was truth in her declaration, and I eventually
understood—by reading her stories. You can't really convey what happens
to a reader who gives herself over to O' Connor. You can list the events
in a story—they're eventful—but those bare bones don't begin to express
the complex sensations, effects, and theological revelation that shake
you and make you laugh when you're in them. She believes in God, and she
is able to show what He is (to her) in His work. I've read her stories
lots of times; she's converted me to stories as an art form, unable to
be pulled apart.
Alice Elliott Dark was a National Book Awards judge in 2002. Source: National Book Awards
Thursday, March 24, 2011
Summer in Words update
Registration for Summer in Words is opening on April 1
Dates: June 24-26
Location: Hallmark Resort, Cannon Beach, Oregon
Tip: Reserve your room before May 24th to receive the group discount price
Wednesday, March 23, 2011
Arthur Plotnik is in the House
I don't recall exactly when I discovered the word wizard-guru that is Arthur Plotnik. But all I know is that whenever he writes about writing or language or style everything he says is jam-packed with insights. Among his books are The Elements of Expression, The Elements of Editing, The Elements of Authorship, and the bestselling writer's guide Spunk & Bite. Now how could you not appreciate a master who calls a book Spunk & Bite? Like me, you might already marvel at his love of language, his sly twists,wordsmithery, and humor. Which is why when I blogged for Powells I recommended that writers read his books, heed his words and called him a freakin genius-god in the writing world. With his latest book Better Than Great, A Plenitudinous Compendium of
Wallopingly Fresh Superlatives available for preorder and on sale June 1, it seemed like a fine time to ask him questions that I know you'll find elucidating.Q:Could you tell us why you decided to write Better Than Great, A Plenitudinous Compendium of Wallopingly Fresh Superlatives (that's a mouthful). I realize that this is designed to bolster a writer's vocabulary, but I'm wondering if you might have another secret agenda you'd care to divulge.
A: I
could say it was to liberate humankind from the tyranny of stock superlatives,
such as great, awesome, amazing, incredible, and unbelievable. But first, I'd wanted to purge my own vocabulary of
these exhausted, one-size-fits-all terms, the ones we use for anything to be
emphasized. A plate of nachos: awesome.
A trip to Machu Picchu: awesome. New
haircut: amazing. The seas parting: amazing. I was tired of words that had
lost all force and make no distinctions. I even tired of wishing people a great this or fabulous that.
So I
started gathering and shaping playful alternatives for my own use. Soon, in a greeting
card, I was wishing friends a "spumescently brilliant, rapturous,
pleoperfect, clangorous, jollified, gladsome, ebullient, soul-schvitzing,
luminous, boffo, festal holiday season, not to mention a nirvanic New Year's
and annum analeptic." The list soon
grew into a book idea that everyone called, for their (then) lack of a better
word, great.
You seem to genuinely delight in language. Since words are our humble tools,
how can this love of language be passed along to beginning writers?
A: They
have to experience that delight---the heart-juddering frisson of the perfect,
unanticipated word or turn of phrase; the savor of sustained lyricism.
The trouble
is, our everyday world hardly brims with language virtuosos or personalities who
ignite a passion for words. Abbreviated communication forms like texting are
anathema to language-love (though a well-Twittered word can still delight).
Without inspiring models (mostly from reading), new writers become
message-oriented, attitude-oriented, their language rarely acquiring the texture
that makes it adhere and resonate. And so if falls to the deft writing coach to
guide beginners through model passages---eloquent to funky examples, Jane
Austin to Junot Diaz---hoping to plant the love that cannot be suppressed.
Q: What is your explanation of how language stimulates the senses in a reader and
your tips for doing so?
A: Hey,
no essay questions! But the short advice
is: Write to the guts. Get something visceral into the equation---something
that stimulates the sensual memory, the emotions, appetite, nervous system. Devices
for doing so include surprise (we react chemically to the unexpected), sensual
particulars, sensations spelled out, or an association with felt experiences.
For instance,
how do you describe a color to make it sensed and felt? Some examples: "Hectic
red" (Shelley),with that surprising, visceral modifier. "The black of
the void" (Gary Shteyngart), evoking fear---the alarm bell of the senses. "A
green-green-green that makes you want to cry" (Sandra Cisneros), spelling
out the palpable sensation. "Eyes of "anti-freeze green" (Chuck
Palahniuk), a particular reference with chilling associations. "Upholstery
the color of Thousand Island Dressing"(John Banville)---something you can,
ugh, taste.
Q: Do you have sage advice for when to modify and when to leave the noun alone?
And what about adverbs? I'm an anti-adverb editor, but I'm wondering if you're
more lenient than I when it comes to these critters.
A: Leave
nouns alone when, in context, they have all the force and clarity they need. "Memories
lurk like dustballs at the back of drawers," wrote Jay McInerney. Did he mean affecting memories? Fragile,
hidden dustballs? Dresser drawers? Probably. Did he need
to say it? God no. On the other hand, when John Lanchester writes, "This
grew in me an . . . an intellectual
tumescence," we do appreciate having the type of tumescence clarified, as
well as the evocative image.
Same
story with adverbs, which tell us the how (manner) and the how much (degree) of
a verb or modifier. He drank copiously
(degree). He drank sloppily (manner).
He's a reportedly excessive drinker
(manner). Adverbs evolved to supply
extra information, nothing wrong with that. What has given them a bad name is
their frequent (or cliché) use when the information and/or force is already
there: She's completely unique. I was
incoherently babbling. You are totally bedazzling. I hungrily
wolfed the meatballs.
But when
used inventively, adverbs add nuance, tone, and especially emphasis. In Better Than Great's introduction, I offer some examples from journalism
and literature: kneebucklingly sweet;
blissfully deranged; searingly gifted; blamelessly beautiful. And Jessica,
didn't you once recklessly describe
me as a "freakin' genius-god in the writing world"? With the intensifying
adverb "freakin(g)," you were emphasizing the degree of genius-divinity
or the strength of your conviction. Maybe it was excessive, but I liked it so
much that my wife had it printed on a T-shirt. An adverbial T-shirt.
Q: Years ago you wrote that voice
is in "harmony with your roots." I've used that expression many times
while talking to writers about voice--crediting you, of course. I'm wondering
if you could talk a bit about voice in fiction and nonfiction and how writers
can develop a consistent, potent voice.
A:Greater
genius-gods than I have opined that voice is the total of all the decisions you
make as you choose words and put them together. Just about everything in your
education and experience influences those decisions, beginning with your roots
and including your homies, your favorite literary models, your aspirations, and
your relationship to an audience of listeners or readers. Some writing mavens
say that you don't make or "develop" a voice, but that it simply emerges
along with your personality. Rhetoricians from the Greeks on have presented
figures of speech ( for example, hyperbole, metaphor, and irony) and other
devices as the means to a style or voice.
I'm a
little of both schools: the flavor and consistency of your voice will take care
of itself; but understanding the elements of rhetoric---which are about
emphasis and persuasiveness---help give it force. Good writing guides teach
these elements one way or another, and are worth studying to a point. Mainly,
they clear the junk from your writing and reveal patterns for styling your own
wit and inventiveness into something voice-like. But when you write, don't
think about your voice being heard and adored; what you want an audience to
"hear" is ideas, feelings, and story well rendered. The adoration
will come.
Q: What's your best advice to
writers on editing their own writing?
A:Standard advice says: Write first---get the words down---and edit later. I edit partly as I write; it makes me feel better as I go forward, but it's disablingly slow. Whenever you do edit, though, follow the big rules: Omit needless words, as Strunk & White rightly tell you; say it shorter, making sure the verbiage is never too much for the thought. Kill your darlings---those belabored turns of phrase that call attention to themselves and away from the message. Favor the concrete---particulars---over abstractions and generalities. Pay attention to verbs; choose lively ones and drop in an unexpected zinger now and then. Of a victim falling to his death from a building, Gary Shteyngart writes, "his head knew the ground" instead of "his head hit the ground." Wow. Don't overdo any device. And of course, burn and kill all clichés and anything that seems stale; when you talk about voice, freshness is everything!
A:Standard advice says: Write first---get the words down---and edit later. I edit partly as I write; it makes me feel better as I go forward, but it's disablingly slow. Whenever you do edit, though, follow the big rules: Omit needless words, as Strunk & White rightly tell you; say it shorter, making sure the verbiage is never too much for the thought. Kill your darlings---those belabored turns of phrase that call attention to themselves and away from the message. Favor the concrete---particulars---over abstractions and generalities. Pay attention to verbs; choose lively ones and drop in an unexpected zinger now and then. Of a victim falling to his death from a building, Gary Shteyngart writes, "his head knew the ground" instead of "his head hit the ground." Wow. Don't overdo any device. And of course, burn and kill all clichés and anything that seems stale; when you talk about voice, freshness is everything!
Q: I'm also wondering if you could
start a movement to resuscitate awesome so that it recaptures its
original meaning? We'd be happy to aid in the cause.
A:Yes---in
the New Order, "awesome" will be applied only to things inspiring extreme fear or reverence. No
more "awesome toilet paper" or other Yelper-ish acclaim for the
trivial.
Meanwhile,
to prop up the moribund term, Better Than
Great suggests such intensifications as: tongue-dryingly awesome, Colossus-of-Rhodes
awesome, fall-to-your-knees awesome,
awesome on a toot, giga-awesome, industrial-strength awesome, and tera-awesome, which is 10-to-the-twelfth-power awesome, suitable
for most divinities.
But
in our campaign, Jessica, let's require anyone uttering "awesome" to
stagger backward all atremble, respecting
the gravity of the word. Writers using it casually will be forced to watch hour-long
sequences of "King Kong," fearing and revering the awesome ape. Cruel
but necessary.
Q: While attending the University of Wisconsin I enrolled in a class on tree
identification. We'd meander through lovely parks near the campus
identifying trees and learned the differences between spruce and pine.
Then I moved to the Northwest and am still learning the names of species out
here. Can you tell us about your passion for trees as illustrated in The
Urban Tree Book? Do you tree gaze in Chicago these days?
A:When
I started that book (with my wife, the illustrator) I was a new convert to tree
love, the most passionate kind. Learning enough to write an authoritative guide
opened worlds of pleasure on every block. Trees took on personalities. I could
all but talk with them. Okay, I do sometimes talk to them. Sadly, these days
the conversation is often depressing. It's like walking through an injury ward:
practically every urban tree is fighting off ailments, many of them caused by our
carelessness or lack of care. Trees are like writers to some degree: they give
so much, don't ask a lot, get pissed on, and somehow keep giving.
A:Why
Shakespeare, of course, the real genius-god. We'd quaff a few pints of grog,
talk about words, and have a laugh over the evolution of English into rap. I might
ask, "Ay yo, Will---whutup wit all dem mysteries 'bout ya'll and who scribed
ya plays?" Thus I'd be getting the 411
for a definitive biography with a seven-figure advance.
Q:Pasta or sushi?
A: Basta
with the pasta. And make my maki a dal
makhani, the summa-cum-yummy Indian dish.
Q:What's on your nightstand?
Q:What's on your nightstand?
A: Gary Shteyngart's
Super Sad True Love Story, as you
might have guessed by now. His eye and ear are Wüsthof-knife sharp in this, his
best novel. Also on the table, my Soft Bite guard against tooth grinding,
because apparently it's not enough for writers to grind it out all day
Q: What projects are you working
on next?
A: Launching
the new book is a big time-suck, but I'm amusing myself gathering modern
metaphors as I encounter them, putting them in categories. Something might come of it, but here's what
kind of fun they offer in the meantime (from the APPEARANCE category):
“You’ve had a face like a smacked arse since
you got here.” —Zadie Smith
“Look at the head on that sheygets, the thing
has its own atmosphere, . . . Thing has
ice caps. . . . Every time I see it, I feel sorry for necks.” ---Michael Chabon
". . . his
father’s nose like a skinned animal pinned to his face with the shiny metallic
tackheads of his eyes, his mother a shapeless sack of organs with a howling
withered skull stuck atop it." ---T.C. Boyle
"He had the
complexion of baba ghanoush." ---Marisha Pessl
" ... a visage
of absolutely uncompromising vapidity and bloodlessness; a face like the belly
of a toad." ---Will Self
Monday, March 21, 2011
For those of you who are working at breaking into publishing, don't forget that opportunities exist to publish flash fiction. For inspiration check out Micr-O Fiction: 8 Provocative Writers Tell Us a Story in 300 Words or Less
Spring!
Before you answer the siren's call of your garden or other springtime activities, take stock of your writing goals. How much have you accomplished these first months of the year? How are you going to stay on track as the weather becomes sweeter? What are you learning about craft and how are you applying it?Keep writing, keep dreaming, have heart
Sunday, March 20, 2011
Why Art Matters
Last night we drove south through Washington and into Oregon, a huge silver moon shimmering overhead. I taught a workshop yesterday in northern Washington and Friday we stopped at the Museum of Glass in Tacoma, Washington on our way north. In case you're not familiar with it, it's the home of a studio (the Hot Shop) and a furnace that's in use by visiting artists and the resident glass blowers, and a place to watch their transformations take shape, stunning collections, and is a place as magical as an enchanted forest. In fact, there is an enchanted forest there--only it's in glass.
The highlight of our tour was the children's inspirations that had been turned into art, The Kids Design Glass Collection (it will be there through October 31). "The Museum has a growing collection of objects created by a variety of artists interpreting drawings that have been submitted by children and selected by Museum staff. This body of work celebrates the rich imagination of children while documenting the interpretive skill of the glass art community. It uniquely fulfills the Museum’s mission to involve the public in a dynamic learning environment that promotes the appreciation of glass as an artistic medium."
I walked out of there my head swirling with color, thinking about the kids, and the glass blowers, and how glass blowing has been in existence for 5,000 years. So grateful for art and the artists who keep alive the ancient forms. Art feeds us. As writers we need to be immersed in all the arts, to be nourished and inspired and rejuvenated.
And with that thought, here's a link to Jeanette Winterson's piece in The Guardian on why art matters The Secret Life of Us. She says in part:
Art is a different value system. Like God, it fails us continually.
Like God, we have legitimate doubts about its existence but, like God,
art leaves us with footprints of beauty. We sense there is more to life
than the material world can provide, and art is a clue, an intimation,
at its best, a transformation. We don't need to believe in it, but we
can experience it. The experience suggests that the monolith of
corporate culture is only a partial reality. This is important
information, and art provides it.
When you take time to read a
book or listen to music or look at a picture, the first thing you are
doing is turning your attention inwards. The outside world, with all of
its demands, has to wait. As you withdraw your energy from the world,
the artwork begins to reach you with energies of its own. The creativity
and concentration put into the making of the artwork begin to
cross-current into you. This is not simply about being recharged, as in a
good night's sleep or a holiday, it is about being charged at a
completely different voltage.
Friday, March 18, 2011
"From now on I hope always to stay alert, to educate
myself as best I can. But lacking this, in the future I will relaxedly
turn back to my secret mind to see what it has observed when I thought I
was sitting this one out. We never sit anything out.
We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out." ~ Ray Bradbury
We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out." ~ Ray Bradbury
Thursday, March 17, 2011
Happy St. Patrick's Day
To all the Irish and wearers of the green out there. When I was a girl my mother would play "Danny Boy" on the morning of St. Patrick's Day. So this morning while my tea was brewing I found myself singing a few bars "Oh come ye back when summer's in the meadow Or when the valley's hushed and white with snow...." Although it was early and I was having particular trouble with the high notes.Keeping on top of today's fast-changing publishing industry can be exhausting and worrying. There are so many influences happening that sometimes it seems that predictions are impossible and hope is waning. Here is Jenna Glazer's latest blog post Publishing and Me, and the Great Freak Out of 2010 about the topic. I thought it was noteworthy because she's so prolific and has lots of contacts in the industry.
Keep writing, keep dreaming, have heart
Wednesday, March 16, 2011
When I write I am trying to express my way of being in the world. This is primarily a process of elimination: once you have removed all the dead language, the second-hand dogma, the truths that are not your own but other people's, the mottos, the slogans, the out-and-out lies of your nation, the myths of your historical moment - once you have removed all that warps experience into a shape you do not recognise and do not believe in - what you are left with is something approximating the truth of your own conception. That is what I am looking for when I read a novel; one person's truth as far as it can be rendered through language. This single duty, properly pursued, produces complicated, various results. It's certainly not a call to arms for the autobiographer, although some writers will always mistake the readerly desire for personal truth as their cue to write a treatise or a speech or a thinly disguised memoir in which they themselves are the hero. Fictional truth is a question of perspective, not autobiography. It is what you can't help tell if you write well; it is the watermark of self that runs through everything you do. It is language as the revelation of a consciousness. ~ from Fail Better, Zadie Smith
Zadie Smith's 10 Good Writing Habits
Skies are pale slate this morning and rain is drumming down and the misery in Japan continues. It seems so important not to become numb to their suffering and loss, to learn lessons large and small from all that went wrong.
Continuing on with the theme of writers sharing wisdom, here are some jewels from Zadie Smith. She's the author of White Teeth, Autograph Man, On Beauty. Her essay about writers Fail Better is here and here is a link to a Powells interview where she talks about her writing influences (I do think of families as being somewhat pathological.)
1.When still a child, make sure you read a lot of books. Spend more time doing this than anything else.
2.When an adult, try to read your own work as a stranger would read it, or even better, as an enemy would.
3. Don’t romanticise your “vocation.” You can either write good sentences or you can’t. There is no “writer's lifestyle.” All that matters is what you leave on the page.
4. Avoid your weaknesses. But do this without telling yourself that the things you can’t do aren’t worth doing. Don’t mask self-doubt with contempt.
5. Leave a decent space of time between writing something and editing it.
6. Avoid cliques, gangs, groups. The presence of a crowd won’t make your writing any better than it is.
7. Work on a computer that is disconnected from the Internet.
8. Protect the time and space in which you write. Keep everybody away from it, even the people who are most important to you.
9.Don’t confuse honours with achievement.
10.Tell the truth through whichever veil comes to hand—but tell it. Resign yourself to the lifelong sadness that comes from never being satisfied.
From an article in The Guardian
Skies are pale slate this morning and rain is drumming down and the misery in Japan continues. It seems so important not to become numb to their suffering and loss, to learn lessons large and small from all that went wrong.
Continuing on with the theme of writers sharing wisdom, here are some jewels from Zadie Smith. She's the author of White Teeth, Autograph Man, On Beauty. Her essay about writers Fail Better is here and here is a link to a Powells interview where she talks about her writing influences (I do think of families as being somewhat pathological.)
1.When still a child, make sure you read a lot of books. Spend more time doing this than anything else.
2.When an adult, try to read your own work as a stranger would read it, or even better, as an enemy would.
3. Don’t romanticise your “vocation.” You can either write good sentences or you can’t. There is no “writer's lifestyle.” All that matters is what you leave on the page.
4. Avoid your weaknesses. But do this without telling yourself that the things you can’t do aren’t worth doing. Don’t mask self-doubt with contempt.
5. Leave a decent space of time between writing something and editing it.
6. Avoid cliques, gangs, groups. The presence of a crowd won’t make your writing any better than it is.
7. Work on a computer that is disconnected from the Internet.
8. Protect the time and space in which you write. Keep everybody away from it, even the people who are most important to you.
9.Don’t confuse honours with achievement.
10.Tell the truth through whichever veil comes to hand—but tell it. Resign yourself to the lifelong sadness that comes from never being satisfied.
From an article in The Guardian
Tuesday, March 15, 2011
"Sounds travel through space long after their wave
patterns have ceased to be detectable by the human ear: some cut right
through the ionosphere and barrel on out into the cosmic heartland,
while others bounce around, eventually being absorbed into the vibratory
fields of earthly barriers, but in neither case does the energy
succumb; it goes on forever - which is why we, each of us, should take
pains to make sweet notes." ~ Tom Robbins
Writing advice: Andrew Morton
Below is more writing advice that first appeared in The Guardian from former British Poet Laureate (which is a ten-year post in England) Andrew Morton
10 Techniques to Spark the Writing
1.Decide when in the day (or night) it best suits you to write, and organise your life accordingly.
2.Think with your senses as well as your brain.
3.Honour the miraculousness of the ordinary.
4.Lock different characters/elements in a room and tell them to get on.
5.Remember there is no such thing as nonsense.
6.Bear in mind Wilde’s dictum that “only mediocrities develop”— and challenge it.
7.Let your work stand before deciding whether or not to serve.
8.Think big and stay particular.
9.Write for tomorrow, not for today.
10.Work hard.
Below is more writing advice that first appeared in The Guardian from former British Poet Laureate (which is a ten-year post in England) Andrew Morton
10 Techniques to Spark the Writing
1.Decide when in the day (or night) it best suits you to write, and organise your life accordingly.
2.Think with your senses as well as your brain.
3.Honour the miraculousness of the ordinary.
4.Lock different characters/elements in a room and tell them to get on.
5.Remember there is no such thing as nonsense.
6.Bear in mind Wilde’s dictum that “only mediocrities develop”— and challenge it.
7.Let your work stand before deciding whether or not to serve.
8.Think big and stay particular.
9.Write for tomorrow, not for today.
10.Work hard.
Monday, March 14, 2011
5 Bits of Writing Advice from P.D. James
1. Increase your word power. Words are the raw material of our craft. The greater your vocabulary the more effective your writing. We who write in English are fortunate to have the richest and most versatile language in the world. Respect it.
1. Increase your word power. Words are the raw material of our craft. The greater your vocabulary the more effective your writing. We who write in English are fortunate to have the richest and most versatile language in the world. Respect it.
2. Read widely and with discrimination. Bad writing is contagious.
3. Don't just plan to write—write. It is only by writing, not dreaming about it, that we develop our own style.
4. Write what you need to write, not what is currently popular or what you think will sell.
5. Open your mind to new experiences, particularly to the study of
other people. Nothing that happens to a writer—however happy, however
tragic—is ever wasted.
Well there's a pause in the rain here and I keep checking in on the news and body count from the earthquake and tsunami in Japan. On NPR this morning a reporter in Tokyo mentioned how the people seem dazed and shattered as they try to go about their day. Now with the worries about the nuclear power plants, I'm wondering how far all the heart break and destruction will reach.
In my lectures about the origins of storytelling I always mention how early humans used stories to communicate their fears and worries, including how nature rattles and thunders and smotes. (I don't think I've ever used smote in a sentence before, but it does feel like a mighty hand sweeps down from time to time, with a ferocity that awes and terrifies.)
These stories, which began back during an Ice Age, were often told out of necessity. Think about it—if you passed on stories about the run-in with the mammoth
or the saber tooth tiger, or speculated about a lightening strike from the
thunderstorm the previous night, you were passing along valuable lessons in
survival. Over time, these survival stories
became more elaborate, humans created art in response to their environment and their questions about pain, and death and stars.
Eventually mythos evolved—the
need to inspire through drama. And here we are still on the brink of a new century, and our new methods of storytelling can show us a tsunami roaring in and destroying marinas, bridges, buildings as if they were as insignificant and flimsy as Tinker Toys and Matchbox Cars as it is happening, across what we imagined was an endless ocean. Images of the ravaged coast almost too horrifying to take in.
The circle of storytelling continues to make sense out of suffering and loss and heartbreak. And to lend hope. Keep writing, keep telling stories.
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